A critique? Hm. Well I wouldn't request a critique on something that isn't finished. Lol but... I would critique anyways.
The first thing I noticed is that the right paw looks a bit awkward. The left one looks fine, so I would try to make the right paw mor symetrical to the left paw.
Second, the chin on the right side of the tounge looks a bit too big. Idk just my look at it I guess.
And I would move the wires, quarters, and posey thing. XD
It distracts people from the actual drawing.
Finish eeet! >:UUUUUU